Ooooooooh those chills!
For such a short story (and I mean REALLY short) this was excellent, I really enjoyed this!!
The only reason I didn't give this 5 stars was because of it's length...I really wanted more.
This story had more twists and turns in it than most of the full length novels I have read and it kept me guessing all the way through. You just don't know who is good and who is bad, you don't know whose side to be on and when you think you've worked it out there's another twist!
Plus it has Vampires...awesomeness!
The writing was great, the pace was fast and the editing was very well done.
If this author ever does a full length novel I would want to read it; no doubts there at all.